Rough Cut with finished Music

This is a second rough cut of our piece with a rough cut of music along with it.
Our friend Joe Reeves has composed the music himself.
We are happy with the way he has composed it, it is very nearly the finished piece that we want to use. It includes the urban modern techno sound to it whilst also being thrilling and fast pace.
We are very happy with the way it builds in tension, constantly layering the track.
We want to improve the soundtrack as we think it's a little too upbeat at the moment, we want it to be heavier and darker with some lower notes to build some more tension.
We have also added a new element to our narrative, we realised that it didn't make sense. People who were viewing our piece didn't understand why our Protagonist was on the run. We discovered it was vital that a threat or a change had to take place in order for the narrative to make sense.